Hello Cris,
That good new!
Your grandmother is good. With the money you can to buy a camera or may be go
holidays. May be you can visit me! You can to save money to,
good idea! What your parents think? I think yes camera good idea you can make
fotos and send me.
Have nice time and
tell me your decide what you do.
I wait your answer.
Kiss Ana
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Content: 4 Although
there is some irrelevance at the start when the candidate repeats the situation
rather than offering advice, the task has been
addressed. The target reader is informed.
Communicative Achievement:3 Straightforward
ideas are communicated in generally appropriate ways.The letter format
is attempted.
Organisation: 2 The
letter is connected and coherent.Sentences tend to
be short and are connected with a limited number of basic linking words: or;
and, and cohesive devices.
Language: 3 Everyday
vocabulary is used appropriately. Simple grammatical
forms are used with reasonable control. Several errors are
present, but meaning can still be determined:
- that good new - that's good news
- you can to buy - you could buy
- make fotos - take photos
- tell me your decide - let me know your decision or let me know what you decide
