That’s great! Your grandmother is very kind and nice.
However, I can see you have a difficult decision to make. If I were you I would try to use some of the money for the holiday and save the rest (although I don’t know how much you have or how much the holiday costs). What do you think? The camera could be a good idea, but how often do you use a camera? And you can ask your friends to take photos on the holiday so you still have some!
Anyway, write to me and tell me what you do.
Love Martina.
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Content: 5 All content is relevant to the task with appropriate expansion. The target reader is fully informed.Communicative Achievement 5: The target reader’s attention is held throughout. The format is consistently appropriate to the task.
Organisation: 5 The text is well organised and coherent, with a variety of linking words: but; and; so, and cohesive devices.
Language: 5 A good range of everyday and some less common lexis is used appropriately. A range of simple and more complex grammatical forms is used with a good degree of control. There are no errors.
