Pat, I have a bad
news for you. I have lost sunglasses that you borrowed me.
Yesterday I went to the swimming-pool and when I was swimming
someone took your sunglasses from my bag. Sorry but I will buy you
a new ones. What is your favorite model?
Mark:
5 A very good
attempt at the task. All elements of the task are fully communicated and
no effort is required of the reader.
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Hi Pat, how are
you. I’m writting for sorry I lost the your sunglasses when
swim in the beach but I can to buy news for you if like. Sorry bye
Mark: 3 Satisfactory
attempt at task. All elements of the message are communicated but
some effort is required by the reader.
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Hello, how do you
feel? I right you to say that I lost my favorite sunglasses in the
bedroom on the small tabe and I’d like have some new ones. thiks a
lot.
Mark: 2 An inadequate
attempt. The first content element has been omitted, the second is
unclear and the third has been unsuccessfully dealt with. The message
is only partly communicated. Significant effort is required of the
reader.
