During a lifetime there
is so many days you could call, the most important day of your life. It could be the day you chose
wich school you are going to, or what you want to work with the rest of your life.
Another important day is when you get married, or you chose where to live. But most of all it must be a very important day when you give birth to a child. I think that changes everything you have been doing until then. Than you have to
realice that somebody
are more important than yourself.
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Mark: 5 This is a very good attempt requiring no effort by the reader. The writer is conifdent, ambitious, and well organised. There is a wide range of structures and vocabulary within the task set and errors, though present, are minor and due to ambition.
