The most important day of my life is that happen on the day I first went to university which is a
beatiful morden technology school in my home town. The reason why the day is most important is that in my country not everyone who a student can enter to a university. In the year which I went to university is about 4 in 10 student might to into the school. Because this. you could imagine
how luck am I. Of course need I study hard and pass the exams which every student must attend and do my best to get high scores. In my mind I still remembered that day
I wore my best cloth and felt full of exciting for my future.
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Mark: 3 The answer is ambitious but flawed by a number of mostly non-impeding errors. The range of structures and vocabulary is adequate (and sometimes more than adequate) for the task. There is some attempt at organisation, although the script requires some effort by the reader at times.
