Sam,
I very like the
week’s holiday staying at your home. I really enjoyed swimming with you
in the sea, it was fun. But my journey home was awful, I had to
stay twenty hours in a plane. Why don’t you come to
visit my place
next summer?
Thu
Mark: 5 A very good
attempt at the task. All three elements of the message are fully
communicated and no effort is required of the reader.
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Hi Sam,
The journey back
home was so boring. I didn’t want to come back to my house. I
really love the time with you, but my favourite time was when we went
to the lake. The next holidays you have to come
to my house.
Love, Fernanda
Mark: 4 A good attempt at
the task. All three elements of the message are communicated.
Minimal effort is required of the reader.
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Hi, Sam.
I good
journey home. I journey home on the bus. In next year you mast to
visit me. It was enjoyed about visit you.
How are you? I’m
happy, very happy! London is a beauteful citti. I will phoning you.
By, Lera
Mark: 3 A satisfactory
attempt at the task. All three content elements have been communicated
but some effort is required of the reader.
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Dear Sam,
I wanted to say
that I’m well. I had very nice holidays. This holidays were super. I want
to go to you again. I want to see places of interest again. I
want to see you too!
Please write me
how are you. What is the wather in London.
I’m waiting to your
answer.
Valeria
Mark: 2 An inadequate
attempt at the task. There is sufficient information concerning what
the candidate enjoyed about his stay but there are no details about
the journey home and no invitation has been made. The message is
only partly communicated.
