How are you how is things everything is allright I am sure it is. I received your letter and I am realy Pleased that you are doing university and that was a nice idia Free time computer games and you asked me what am I doing in my free time as you know I am always busy I am working five days a week mon.wed. fri. and weekend. I have no Free time. as you know in the morning I do collage too. OK we will see you soon I am sure by for now. Take care of your self
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Mark: 2 The letter is incoherent at times due to poor sentence structure and erratic punctuation, which causes considerable effort to be required by the reader. The language used is fairly simplisitc and contains basic errors, which occaisionally imede communication.
It is an acceptable interpretation of the task for the candidate to say that they have no free time and to explain why.
