Hi James,
Your party yesterday was very nice. Thanks for inviting
me. The best I liked was that interesting game we played. I think we could meet
on next Saturday because on Friday I have school.
Bye, your dear Marco
Mark: 5 All content points are covered appropriately. Minor language errors do not impede clear communication of the message.
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Dear James,
The party was great! I’ve never been in so interesting
party. Thank you for organising this party! The best in your party were the
music and attractive games. I want to meet you again!
Your friend, Ali
Mark: 3 One content element is omitted: The writer doesn't suggest when to meet again. The other content elements are clearly communicated.
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Thanks for your invitation... so I won’t come. Inside of
party, I prefer going theatre cinema, and walking.
After tomorrow we can meet green park and as we walk. We
talk. See you. NOT! O didn’t realise yesterday. After I write, I realised.
Mark: 1 Little relevant content as the party is in the future. Message requires excessive effort on part of the reader.
