Dear David,
In your last letter you want to know about my favourite
TV programme. I going to tell you about it.
My best TV programme is ‘Ali
McBeal’. I love it because it make me laugh so much. I’m fiel close to ‘Ali’
which is the main actress. I think it is because I am in my thirties like she.
All the stories are very funny. I enjoy the music too what is very nice. Ali
is a single woman which want to find a ideal man but always happen a lot of
things and finaly she is along again.
You should watch this programme, I think you’ll enjoy it.
I hope see you soon,
Luz
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Mark: 3 Language is ambitious but flawed by a number of errors, though these are mainly non-impeding. The letter is quite well organised. There is an adequate range of language for the task.